Answer:
D. "Marjorie," Russ said. "Listen carefully. There's something you need
to know."
Step-by-step explanation:
This one gives suspense because it leaves us wondering what could Russ possibly want to tell Marjorie. We as humans are curious and start to wonder about all the possible things Russ could say to Marjorie that he wants to tell her. This sentence leaves us asking if something wrong happened, if he did something bad, if there is an important secret he must share, etc. Answer A, and B dont have much suspense because it clearly explains what happens. Answer C leaves only a very little bit of suspense but not nearly as much as D.