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Could someone please edit this with stronger words and compact it down to the importance?

Could someone please edit this with stronger words and compact it down to the importance-example-1
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As team leader representing our middle school, I was petrified. Despite weeks of preparation, I was awestruck when we arrived at the unfamiliar school. Surrounded by older students and teachers, I felt incredibly intimidated as we watched high schoolers expertly manipulate their robots with impressive ease. Our turn came too quickly, and we were called up to the stage as "Team 15201A."

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