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"Dangerous hazards must be addressed with a Plan of Correction immediately. " This sentence is not clear and concise. What should you do to improve this sentence?
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"Dangerous hazards must be addressed with a Plan of Correction immediately. "

This sentence is not clear and concise. What should you do to improve this sentence?

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“Dangerous hazards must be dealt with at once, with a Plan of Correction.”

I am sorry if it’s wrong
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