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Well, Jeanette told her teacher the plans first and wasn’t as supported as she thought but she thought it was a terrible idea to finish high school in New York to be considered in the state for college. But had a point about friends and family also the senior year would be weird. Then her mother was not supportive she seemed jealous because she was stuck in Virginia and her dad brushed her off about the idea as well the only real support system was Lori. but the father ended up coming together and supported and even gave his daughter a weapon to feel safe in New York. When I decided to go to wright state after Sinclair to be a social worker, I had family who was supportive and some family who was not saying I’m too old to start my bachelor’s let alone my master’s and I didn’t let it get to me I have been through a lot over the years and I feel this is my path to help and counsel others

what's a good theses statement for the above paragraph

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A possible thesis statement for the above paragraph could be:

"Overcoming obstacles and unsupportive attitudes, both Jeanette in her pursuit of college and the author in their decision to become a social worker, demonstrate the importance of staying true to one's goals and aspirations despite external challenges."

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