Question

Lynne wants to ensure that she is not using any of the vague banned words in her story. To be safe, what word should she avoid in this sentence: The 2021 Tesla model y has a lot of new things that could excite buyers

Answer 1

I am not sure if you’re looking for multiple answers, the one that stands out the most is “new things”. The word “things” is always a no-no in writing unless you’re purposely trying to be vague.

To complete transform the sentence, I’d say: “The 2021 Tesla Model Y has several new gimmicks, which is exciting to buyers.”