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Please, is my wording of this text correcting? I mean linguistically and academically. I need your help because my English is not good (you can edit or add any sentences on the email)

Note: The answer should be written in "Word program", not in handwriting. Thanks

Dear all,
I have attached an interruption request to you in this email and I need your help please in this regard.
Describe circumstances:
I submitted my second-year report on the third of November and was waiting to do my second-year viva on Friday the 16th of December 2022, but I received news from my family in Saudi Arabia that my sister died, who had throat cancer a few months ago. It would not have been easy without the assistance of my academic supervisor Prof. Tim and the research team and those who stood by me helped and supported me with my need to go home (Saudi Arabia) and stay with my family for a few days until 11th of January 2023.

I really thank you and appreciate you for that
Sincerely,
Ali

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Your wording seems correct but try to limit the use of one word multiple times “Saudi Arabia” try minimizing the usage of that word as the reader will have the idea
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