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imagine you are the brook. write a vivid description of something else you see on the way and add a couple of lines to the poem

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I am a brook, I flow through the forest,

I see many things on my way.

The trees, the flowers, the birds, the animals,

They all pass by me each day.

Today, I saw a deer,

A beautiful creature, so graceful.

It was drinking from my waters,

And its eyes were so full of wonder.

I felt a connection with the deer,

As if we were kindred spirits.

We are both part of nature,

And we both belong to this place.

I will never forget the deer,

And I will always cherish the moment

When our eyes met, and we shared a silent understanding.

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Here is the additional part of the poem:

> I felt a connection with the deer,

> As if we were kindred spirits.

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