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It was a
raing day and
I was alone at home story writing

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Answer and Explanation:

It was a rainy day, and I was alone at home, writing a story.

In this sentence, there are a few errors that can be corrected:

1. "raing" should be "rainy" to correctly describe the day as being characterized by rain.

2. There should be a comma after "day" to separate the introductory phrase "It was a rainy day" from the rest of the sentence.

3. "and" should be capitalized since it starts a new independent clause.

4. "I" should be capitalized since it is the beginning of a new sentence.

5. "story writing" should be hyphenated as "story-writing" to function as a compound adjective modifying "day." Alternatively, it can be rephrased as "writing a story."

Corrected sentence:

It was a rainy day, and I was alone at home, writing a story.

In this sentence, the corrected version conveys that it was a rainy day, and the speaker was at home, engaged in the activity of writing a story.

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