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Sentence (11): Direct deposit may be an option that you elect for as your choice at any time during the next 6 months. The most effective revision of sentence 11 would begin with which group of words? * 1 point To elect direct deposit because You having the next 6 months You may elect to change 6 months of direct deposit For as long as 6 months later

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The most effective revision of sentence 11 would begin with the group of words: "You may elect to change".

So the revised sentence would be: "You may elect to change to direct deposit at any time during the next 6 months."

This revision maintains the original meaning while improving clarity and conciseness.

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