Question

Read the sentence.

I was telling my dad about how much I like starting a new notebook.

Which revision of this section of dialogue best shows the narrator’s feelings?

Answer 1

Here are some possible revisions of the sentence that could better show the narrator's feelings:

1. "I was excitedly telling my dad about the thrill I get from starting a new notebook."

2. "I was gushing to my dad about how much I absolutely love starting a new notebook."

3. "I was animatedly telling my dad about the joy I feel when I start a new notebook."

4. "I was enthusiastically telling my dad about how much I adore starting a new notebook."

Each of these revisions adds adjectives and adverbs that convey the narrator's excitement and enthusiasm, helping to better show their feelings about starting a new notebook.