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Choose the most effective revision for the underlined part of the sentence. If no revision is necessary, choose "Leave it as is."

When Shasta and me got home from the game, we called Marla to tell she about our victory.

When Shasta and I got home from the game, we called Marla to tell her about our victory.
When they got home from the game, they called Marla to tell her about our victory.
When Shasta and she got home from the game, we called Marla to tell her about their victory.
Leave it as is.

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When Shasta and I got home from the game, we called Marla to tell her about our victory.
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