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Which comment would be MOST useful as feedback on a flash fiction story?

I wish the main character had been a boy instead of a girl; it would make more sense.
Can you replace the main character with someone who is more likable?
The ending seemed a little too vague about the surprise it is supposed to describe.
Your story is too short to achieve its purpose--it should be twice as long.

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In my opinion I would say, "The ending seemed a little too vague about the surprise it is supposed to describe." Because, The ending of a story is the conclusion of the text like; Whether the text is, Funny, sad, romance, ironic, or unclear. The ending sums up the story. I hope that answers your question.

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