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Which revision of the passage best improves its clarity and flow?
My parents always go hiking on the weekends in fact they took us to
the state park just last Saturday
A. On the weekends, my parents always go hiking in fact they took us
to the state park just last Saturday
B. My parents, always go hiking on the weekends, in fact they took us
to the state park just last Saturday
C. My parents always go hiking on the weekends. In fact, they took us
to the state park just last Saturday
D. In fact they took us to the state park just last Saturday, because
my parents always go hiking on the weekends.

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2 votes

Answer:

a

Explanation:i got it correct

User Riccardo Marotti
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Answer:

B

Step-by-step explanation:

Sounds more logical

Also, sorry if im wrong

Just double check with other answers you have received

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