Follow along with me! The final product is at the end.
Capitalize the “F” in “for”. Insert a comma after “years.” Capitalize Esperanza neck it’s a proper noun (a place), then add a comma after it. Insert a coma after “tall,” between the two adjectives. Add a period after sugarcane fields, then capitalize recently because it’s the beginning of a new sentence. Add a comma after recently. Capitalize “Ferozbad” because it’s a proper noun (place), then add a coma after it. Add a period after “farming.” Capitalize “at” because it’s now the beginning of a new sentence. Again, capitalize “Ferozbad,” then add a comma after it. Add a comma after brothers, then after sisters. Capitalize “Ferozbad Government School” because it’s the name of a school. End the sentence after “School” with a period, then capitalize “This.” Capitalize “Ramesh” because it’s the name of a person, then add a comma. Add a period after “cheerful,” then capitalize “we.” Finally, add a period after “often.”
This is what the paragraph should look like now (final product):
For ten years, I lived at Esperanza, a tiny village surrounded by tall, waving
sugarcane fields. Recently, we moved to Ferozbad, where my father acquired
a twenty acre parcel of land for farming. At Ferozbad, my brothers, and sisters,
and I attended Ferozbad Government School. This is where I met my friend
Ramesh, he was quite friendly and cheerful. We went for walks around the
village very often.
Hope this helped! If I’ve made any errors, please tell me. I’m still learning myself.