Question

Please use the paragraph bellow and do the directions i have less than a day t turn this in

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To add on, In the story “Calypso Borealis” by John Muir he used many imagery words such as “beautiful” and “wonderful”. Nature left a powerful impact on John Muir whenever he was in the woods by himself. Paragraph 4 states, “It seems wonderful that so frail and lovely a plant has such power over human hearts.” The flower had a big impact on his emotions. When he saw the flower, he felt his worries disappear and he didn’t feel hungry or lonely. In addition paragraph 3 states “It seemed the most spiritual of all the flower people I had ever met. I sat down beside it and fairly cried for joy.” Muir's essay describes a flower and relates it to nature's beauty.
Revision Focus: Idea Development and Transitions
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Carry out the following revisions to improve your second body paragraph.

Introduction of quotation: Improve the introduction of at least two of your quotations. Highlight the revision.
Evidence: Add or change (make it shorter, make it longer, or change it entirely) two examples in the paragraph. If you add an example, be sure it is explained. Highlight the revision.
Explanation: Strengthen the explanation of two of your examples by connecting the evidence and the controlling idea. Highlight the revision.
Connections: Add an explanation that connects the two texts. Highlight the revision.
Transitions: Include a minimum of three transitional words or phrases to connect ideas. Highlight the transitions in your topic sentence and within your body paragraph.
Edit: Read your new and improved second body paragraph. Ensure the spelling, punctuation, and usage are correct.
Include your revised and edited paragraph below:

Answer 1

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Step-by-step explanation:

In "Calypso Borealis," John Muir captures the beauty of the night sky with his vivid imagery and personification of the stars. He writes, “The stars, some of them, seem to be made of molten silver, others of gold, others of diamond dust, and all of them are breathing and throbbing with song” (Muir 54). Muir's description of the stars as molten silver and gold, as well as diamond dust, evokes a sense of wonder and awe. The stars appear to be alive, with their breath and throbbing song, as if they are singing a celestial melody. Similarly, in "When I Heard the Learn'd Astronomer," Walt Whitman captures the vastness of the night sky. He states, “How soon unaccountable I became tired and sick,/ Till rising and gliding out I wander'd off by myself/ In the mystical moist night-air, and from time to time/ Look'd up in perfect silence at the stars” (Whitman 8-12). Whitman's depiction of the stars in the "mystical moist night-air" conveys a feeling of serenity and peace. Both poets express the beauty and grandeur of the stars, which bring a sense of awe and wonder to the readers. Connecting these two texts, both authors use vivid imagery and personification to describe the stars in the night sky, creating a feeling of admiration and peace for their readers. Furthermore, both poets express the overwhelming vastness of the stars, which evokes a sense of humility and awe. In this way, Muir and Whitman demonstrate the beauty and humbling power of the night sky.