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It has taken me months to grow this hairy, long beard! My loving wife, Cindy, absolutely despises it, but I know that she will grow to love it. If you want to know, I think the best part is.... it keeps my face warm in the cold, bitter winter! #beards4life
The calm, blue water at the shore is so therapeutic! I come here many times to relax. There is nothing better than sitting on the beach, reading a book, and basking in the shining sun. #beach
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