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Which detail best contributes to the optimistic mood in

this excerpt?
"I ate red apples / heavy-salted on the tomb"
O"the sleeping Victorian corpses / below fed me
secrets"
O"sentinel owls peered / from a grove of old pines"
O"all of us hoping, waiting on signs / of the change"

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The detail that best contributes to the optimistic mood in this excerpt is "all of us hoping, waiting on signs / of the change." This detail suggests that there is a sense of hope and anticipation for something positive to come, which contributes to an overall optimistic mood. The other details are more neutral or even slightly eerie, with the image of eating heavily salted apples on a tomb and the mention of sentinel owls peering from a grove of old pines. The detail about the sleeping Victorian corpses feeding the speaker secrets is also somewhat mysterious and unsettling.
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