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Many arts, including literature, painting, fiction, poetry, and theater, made the Harlem Renaissance special, but music holds a special place in the history of the period. African American artists developed new styles of music such as jazz. Featuring a new style of piano playing, the people who went to hear this new jazz sound thought it was a refreshing take on an old sound. Jazz began to attract many new music fans to African American clubs, where African Americans gathered to hear the new sound. If the featured pianist played well, then the music was good and more and more people began to listen to jazz.

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Answer: wordiness

Explanation: this phrase is too wordy and can be shorted, it's too long of a phrase and some of it is repeating in a way. There may be more but this is just one of them

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