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Which is these revisions corrects the inappropriate shift in verb tense PLEASE HELP ME!!!

Which is these revisions corrects the inappropriate shift in verb tense PLEASE HELP-example-1

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Option D, "this huge guy in pajamas walked up," corrects the inappropriate shift in verb tense. The original sentence is written in the past tense, but then suddenly shifts to the present tense with "walks up." Option D maintains a consistent past tense throughout the sentence.

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