On a dark winters night I was sitting alone at the dining room table eating some day olds soup however it was as cold as ice and very unappetizing. But I kept eating it because I needed a distraction to think about the past. All of the sudden there was a loud BANG at the door. BANG, BANG BANG! It kept going it felt was yelling at me to open it. I am very hesitant getting up and walking to open it. When I make this walk I am flooded with memories of fifteen years ago to the day. That day me and my brother were playing a game of chess when someone was rapping on the door just like tonight. My bother opened it and he disappeared it to thin air. And now today at this time I make the same trip down the hall to the door. Finally what fells like I been walking forever I get to the door open it. The next thing I see is darkness.
Literary devices used: personification, simile, flashback, and a onomatopoeia
I hope this helps