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i need to write a short story on the prompt "You knock on the door, but no one answers. You have a gut feeling that something is wrong." also with 4 literary devices words in the story pls its urgent!!!!

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On a dark winters night I was sitting alone at the dining room table eating some day olds soup however it was as cold as ice and very unappetizing. But I kept eating it because I needed a distraction to think about the past. All of the sudden there was a loud BANG at the door. BANG, BANG BANG! It kept going it felt was yelling at me to open it. I am very hesitant getting up and walking to open it. When I make this walk I am flooded with memories of fifteen years ago to the day. That day me and my brother were playing a game of chess when someone was rapping on the door just like tonight. My bother opened it and he disappeared it to thin air. And now today at this time I make the same trip down the hall to the door. Finally what fells like I been walking forever I get to the door open it. The next thing I see is darkness.






Literary devices used: personification, simile, flashback, and a onomatopoeia


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Answer: You knock on the door, but no one answers. You have a gut feeling that something is wrong. As you open it slowly, you find yourself standing in an empty room with a single chair and a table. There's also the smell of fresh coffee brewing which makes your stomach growl. "Come in. I hope you like it." The voice comes from behind you, making you jump as though you've been caught doing something wrong. "Who are you?" You ask. "I'm just a friend who wants to help you out." He says. "As long as you don't get too attached or start thinking that I'm some sort of hero then we'll be fine." "What do you want me to do?" You say. "Can I sit down?" He asks, gesturing at the chair across from him. You nod and walk over to it taking a seat. It's not until after you're seated that you realize how nervous you are.

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