Question

. Rewrite this passage to include vivid imagery, description, and dialogue. Have fun with it!

We all got in the car to begin our summer road trip. Dad got into the driver's seat. But for some reason, the car wouldn't start.

Answer 1

Me and my family got into the small, red, cramped minivan. It was packed to the brim with all of our suitcases! We were going to the beach for a couple days, but it was going to be a long trip there. Mom and Dad talked, another way to say argued, with each other for a little bit because Dad's sleep schedule is "out of wack," Mom says, but he insists on driving. Finally, I got Mom to just let go of it and let Dad drive. But when he started the car, all we heard was a sputtering noise. Dad then swore to himself.

Step-by-step explanation:

i did my best

Answer 2

Answer: It was a scorching summer day, there wasn't a cloud in the sky, it was the perfect opportunity for our family was going to go on a road trip to the beach! We all got into the car and buckled our seat belts right as my dad told us that the car wasn't starting. I was completely bummed out, it was a perfect day to go to the beach too. But I decided to not let the day go to waste -- rather, I went inside and unpacked my items from the road trip, sat down on my bed, and took the opportunity to read my favorite book!

Explanation: I hope this was alright!