Read the draft of Rosa's short story.
Marcus and Carlos walked and talked excitedly about the day's activities. First, the pair would stop at the Ramirez house to eat and then
would amble slowly over to the park for that afternoon's festival. As they talked, Marcus could see Carlos's grandmother on the porch waving to
the two boys. After introductions were made, Marcus offered Mrs. Ramirez the bouquet of flowers he had brought.
Entering the house, Marcus saw that red, green, and white decorations adorned the dining room walls. Marcus then stopped and
blinked-the large dining room table was covered with dishes of all kinds-it was a feast!
Everything looks delicious, Mrs. Ramirez," said Marcus.
"Wait until you try her churros, Marcus," interrupted Carlos. "They are spectacular
"Oh you, Carlos, hush." said Mrs. Ramirez, with a big smile on her face.
Rosa wants to continue the story with additional dialogue to develop Marcus's sense of surprise.
Which dialogue would best help Rosa achieve her goal?
1. "Carlos," said Marcus, "Wait until I tell my mother about this!"
2. Till have to be careful" said Marcus, to not eat too much before the festival."
3. "Seriously, though, there is enough food here to feed the neighborhood!" said Marcus.
4. I hope we can bring some of this wonderful food with us to the festival," said Marcus.