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In this course, we have discussed how authors use imagery that relates to a human’s five senses to help their readers better experience what the characters experience in a narrative. Any writer can tell a reader what is happening in a story. Good writers show readers what is happening by creating pictures in readers’ minds. They do this by using sensory language to create vivid details. These details allow readers to connect to images, actions, and scenes through their senses. Sensory language and vivid details improve the style and diction of writing.

Examples of sensory language are

words related to sight: glittering, bright, blurred, shadowy, grimy, hazy
words related to sound: thump, cackle, roar, screech, howl, creak, buzz
words related to touch: scratchy, hot, greasy, icy, fuzzy, velvety
words related to taste: creamy, rotten, salty, sweet, refreshing, zesty
words related to smell: musty, acrid, fragrant, old, perfumed, rancid
Prompt:

Rewrite and then post the following paragraph to include sensory language. Be sure to choose words that create vivid details that create connections to at least four out of five readers' senses. You may use the words above or words you discover on your own.

The alarm went off, and I got out of bed. I stretched and walked to the window to open the blinds. Light entered the room. I could smell breakfast cooking, so I walked to the kitchen. My mom was standing at the stove, making bacon. I sat down at the table and got ready to eat.

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The blaring alarm startled me awake, and I threw off the covers. I stretched my arms and legs, feeling the cool air on my skin. I walked to the window and opened the blinds, and the bright sunlight poured into the room, casting shadows on the floor. The smell of sizzling bacon wafted through the air, and my stomach growled. I walked to the kitchen, and my bare feet felt the cold, hard floor. My mom was standing at the stove, flipping the bacon with a sizzle. I sat down at the table, and the smooth surface of the wood felt cool on my arms. I picked up my fork and knife, ready to dig into the delicious breakfast.

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