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Wordiness: select the most concise sentence.

54
a) Living expenses increase over time.

b) It is a matter of fact that the cost of living always increases.

55
a) Evidence shows that girls are smarter than boys.

b) Truly, it is a fact that girls are smarter than boys.

56
a) I think that tea is better than coffee.

b) In my opinion, I think that tea is better than coffee.

57
a) Because of the fact that she lived in Germany, she drank a lot of beer.

b) While living in Germany, she drank a lot of beer.

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54. a) Living expenses increase over time.

55. a) Evidence shows that girls are smarter than boys.

56. a) I think tea is better than coffee.

57. b) While living in Germany, she drank a lot of beer.


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