Question

Which revision best fixes the vague antecedent in this sentence?

Since Santiago and Matt joined the rowing team, he has practiced a lot
and become the strongest rower on the team.
OA. Since they joined the rowing team, Santiago has practiced a lot
and become the strongest rower on the team.
B. Since Santiago and Matt joined the rowing team, they have
practiced a lot and become the strongest rower on the team.
OC. Since they joined the rowing team, he has practiced a lot and
become the strongest rower on the team.
D. Since Santiago and Matt joined the rowing team, Santiago has
practiced a lot and become the strongest rower on the team.

Answer 1

Option D clearly identifies Santiago as the subject who practiced a lot and became the strongest rower on the team, which effectively resolves the problem of the vague antecedent. Therefore, option D is the best revision.