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Which is the best correction for the inappropriate shift pronoun in this passage. We watched the clown try to make balloon animals for the children none of him looked anything like animals but the children
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Which is the best correction for the inappropriate shift pronoun in this passage.

We watched the clown try to make balloon animals for the children none of him looked anything like animals but the children politely smiled.

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The best correction for the inappropriate shift in pronoun in this passage would be:

"We watched the clown try to make balloon animals for the children, but none of them looked anything like animals. However, the children politely smiled."
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