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Circle the incorrect pronoun shift. Rewrite the sentence correctly.

When people get angry, we sometimes say things we don't mean.

User Raedwald
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Answer:

I think you should circle the first "we" in the sentence.

The person talking is talking about other people, not including them.

The correct way to write it would be:

"When people get angry, they sometimes say things they don't mean."

Hope this helped!

- sam

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