I stand in your loving waters
And pray that you bring me
Purification and lasting life.
I plunge my hands into your flow
And offer the drops back into your life-source.
May you too continue for eternity.
The author wants to add alliteration to the poem but wants to keep the same meaning as the original
lines.
Which line could BEST be revised to add alliteration in the stanza of the poem?
And pray that you provide
I stand in your living waters
And offer the water back to you
May you continue for the moment.
A and pray that you provide
B I stand in your living waters
C and offer the water back to you
D may you continue for the moment