Are women’s rights the same as human rights? In 1995, First Lady Hillary Clinton explored this question in her speech to the United Nations Fourth Conference on Human Rights. Through appeals and rhetorical strategies, Clinton convincingly argues that women’s rights are human rights, and thus we must work to eradicate gender inequalities.
What would most improve this introduction?
quoting from the speech to immediately provide a sense of the speaker’s voice
specifying the rhetorical strategies the writer will evaluate in the essay
giving the exact date, time, and location when the author initially delivered the speech
shortening the thesis statement to eliminate references to appeals and rhetorical strategies