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Is this poem good for divorced parents or no? If you could tell me how I could fix it. Soon two homes

One place to another
Walk through different doors
Only to sit in silence.
Knowing the others gone
Use to be one.
Happy and in love
Now unhappy and loathed
Each day passes
Not a single interaction
Love being abandoned
What about me?
Am I alone?
I now stand in a fear
In the middle waiting
Waiting for the rise
Of a single flag
Let me move on
And forget this war
And just accept it.

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Answer:

It's great

Step-by-step explanation:

It's really really good

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