Question

I wrote the body paragraph, you write the concluding statement.

it should be related to this paragraph please i really need this because it's due tomorrow.



Body paragraph
Topic Sentence:
Students shouldn't wear uniforms, because students can't be creative due to uniformity. They cannot be creative or express themselves in what they wear. Uniforms also cause stress to students and parents. If a family can't afford several sets of uniforms, they may have to wash the uniforms everyday. This also takes away time which can also be spent on schoolwork or rest. According to the website hiline it says “We live in a dynamic society, full of unique characters that make our world spontaneous. Cutting that off at a young age only stifles creativity and encourages conformity.”



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Concluding Statement:

Answer 1

In conclusion, while school uniforms have been traditionally viewed as a way to promote a sense of unity and equality among students, they may ultimately hinder a student's ability to express themselves creatively and cause additional stress on families. By allowing students to have more freedom in their clothing choices, we can encourage them to embrace their individuality and creativity, ultimately leading to a more dynamic and diverse society.