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Hey can someone please check the intro of my essay. Like is the thesis strong, add more information, change in sentences/content, does it flow well/transitions?, does it grab the readers attention? And
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Hey can someone please check the intro of my essay. Like is the thesis strong, add more information, change in sentences/content, does it flow well/transitions?, does it grab the readers attention? And please let me know/explain it well and be honest!

Hey can someone please check the intro of my essay. Like is the thesis strong, add-example-1
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I think it's fine. It gets straight to the point which makes it easier to read.

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