Answer:
The in-text citation in the given sentence is incorrect because it does not include the author’s last name and the year of publication. A correct version of the sentence with a proper APA style in-text citation would be:
For example, one critic argues, “In multiple, large-scale studies where technology has been incorporated into the learning experiences of hundreds of students across multiple schools and school systems, they have been associated with better academic outcomes than comparable classrooms that did not include technology” (Author’s Last Name, Year, p. 53).