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Some readers believe the woman has fallen prey to her desire.

Others argue she has become a powerful predator.
Revise your work. Try using a joining word to show that the two ideas are opposites.

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Although some readers believe the woman has fallen prey to her desire, others argue that she has become a powerful predator.

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