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Fix the pronoun shift in this sentence. Re-type the sentence correctly.

Many people feel overwhelmed when they start a new job. However, they soon learn that with hard work and a good attitude you can make a positive impact. ​

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Answer: Many people feel overwhelmed when they start a new job. However, they soon learn that with hard work and a good attitude they can make a positive impact. ​

Explanation: "Many people" was replaced with the pronoun they. The pronoun (they) shifted incorrectly to "you".

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