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Anya is revising her informational essay and comes across this paragraph: Contrary to popular opinion, sheep are smart and social animals with great memories and a wide range of emotions. They have an excellent sense of smell and rectangular pupils, both serving as help against predators. Sheep form strong bonds with each other, not just between a mother and her lambs, but also deep friendships with other sheep. They can recognize different facial expressions, as well as different faces for years, including human faces. There's this one sheep I know named River who is so cute, and he totally knows his name when you call him! Which sentence should Anya remove to revise her paragraph for coherence? Contrary to popular opinion, sheep are smart and social animals with great memories and a wide range of emotions. Sheep form strong bonds with each other, not just between a mother and her lambs, but also deep friendships with other sheep. There's this one sheep I know named River who is so cute, and he totally knows his name when you call him! They can recognize different facial expressions, as well as different faces for years, including human faces.

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Answer: The sentence "There's one sheep I know named River who is so cute, and he totally knows his name when you call him.

Explanation: It doesn't match the rest of the paragraph

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