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HELP PLZZ Im writing a book, and im stumped on my sentence, soo my character was just running to class bc hes late when he enters the class he says "Sorry im late", can someone help me make those words look like he was out of breath?

Do i make sense or no?

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Answer:

He huffed and puffed louder than ever and said - "Sorry I'm late Ma'am"

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