Question

Choose the sentence that features the most memorable writing. Focus on

active verbs and concrete nouns.

A. While they were waiting for Kelvin in the place, they ate brownies.
B. While they were waiting for Kelvin in the parking lot, they gobbled
brownies.
C. While they were waiting for him in the parking lot, they ate
brownies.
D. While they were waiting for him in the place, they ate food.

Answer 1

Not exactly sure but I'd say the answer is B.) While they were waiting for Kelvin in the parking lot, they gobbled brownies.

Step-by-step explanation:

If not then I also think it's C.