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Directions Read the narrative and answer the question that follows.

(1) You grandkids asked me to write down what I recall about being an emigrant crossing the Great Plains in a covered wagon. (2) It all seems so long ago now. (3) And some things are still too sad or too scary to want to remember. (4) I've heard people say about the overland trails, "The cowards never started, and the weak died along the way." (5) Well, I don't feel right about calling anyone a coward. (6) I've learned the folly of sitting in judgment on other folks. (7) But I will say something about the weak dying along the way. (8) The strong died as well, because smallpox and cholera are no respecters of persons. (9) I saw so many grave markers by the side of the trail.(10) It was in the spring that we started out. (11) Coming from back East, most of us were used to a landscape with plowed fields and woods. (12) The uncultivated, treeless plains stretching to the horizon frightened many emigrants. (13) I guess I was different because, when we left the Missouri River and climbed the bluffs, the view pleased me. (14) There were green hills as far as I could see.(15) We brought the best oxen and horses we had on the farm to pull our wagons, but even so we often traveled only about ten miles a day. (16) This was partly the result of the need of frequent halts to rest both the animals and the emigrants. (17) But bad weather-such as heavy rains-also often slowed us down.(18) One day after traveling some distance we found that our three-year-old Amy was missing, and I still can't recall this without a sick feeling here in the pit of my stomach. (19) She had been left behind when we started moving again after a halt. (20) Mercifully, another wagon train found Amy and soon returned her to us. (21) But the memory of those few hours still haunts me.(22) A good memory is how we celebrated the Fourth of July on the trail. (23) We ate roasted antelope with gooseberry sauce, sang patriotic songs, and recited what we could remember of the Declaration of Independence. (24) This is uplifting to think about. (25) Perhaps that's enough for now. (26) Later I'll tell you about crossing the Columbia River. (27) Now that was an experience!

Question:
How would you use imagery in revising sentence 14 to heighten a joyful mood?
Select one:
a. There were green, grassy hills as far as I could see into the distance.
b. As far as I could see were hills covered with tall grass.
c. Hills covered with lush, emerald-green grass rolled to the horizon.
d. The hills, which were covered with green grass, stretched as far as I could see.

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Final answer:

Option c, 'Hills covered with lush, emerald-green grass rolled to the horizon,' effectively uses imagery to heighten the joyful mood by providing a vivid and detailed description that appeals to the readers' senses and imagination.

Step-by-step explanation:

The student asked how imagery could be used in revising sentence 14 to heighten a joyful mood. Imagery is a literary device used to create a vivid and detailed description that appeals to the senses.

To heighten the joyful mood in sentence 14, detailed and vivid language that conveys the beauty and serenity of the scene will be most effective.

Choosing option c, 'Hills covered with lush, emerald-green grass rolled to the horizon,' uses imagery effectively to create a picture in the reader's mind and evoke a sense of joy and awe.

The word 'lush' conveys a sense of rich, healthy foliage, while 'emerald-green' gives a precise color that is often associated with vibrancy and life. The verb 'rolled' adds a dynamic quality to the hills, making the scene seem alive and inviting.

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