Question

Directions Read the narrative and answer the question that follows.

(1) You grandkids asked me to write down what I recall about being an emigrant crossing the Great Plains in a covered wagon. (2) It all seems so long ago now. (3) And some things are still too sad or too scary to want to remember. (4) I've heard people say about the overland trails, "The cowards never started, and the weak died along the way." (5) Well, I don't feel right about calling anyone a coward. (6) I've learned the folly of sitting in judgment on other folks. (7) But I will say something about the weak dying along the way. (8) The strong died as well, because smallpox and cholera are no respecters of persons. (9) I saw so many grave markers by the side of the trail.(10) It was in the spring that we started out. (11) Coming from back East, most of us were used to a landscape with plowed fields and woods. (12) The uncultivated, treeless plains stretching to the horizon frightened many emigrants. (13) I guess I was different because, when we left the Missouri River and climbed the bluffs, the view pleased me. (14) There were green hills as far as I could see.(15) We brought the best oxen and horses we had on the farm to pull our wagons, but even so we often traveled only about ten miles a day. (16) This was partly the result of the need of frequent halts to rest both the animals and the emigrants. (17) But bad weather-such as heavy rains-also often slowed us down.(18) One day after traveling some distance we found that our three-year-old Amy was missing, and I still can't recall this without a sick feeling here in the pit of my stomach. (19) She had been left behind when we started moving again after a halt. (20) Mercifully, another wagon train found Amy and soon returned her to us. (21) But the memory of those few hours still haunts me.(22) A good memory is how we celebrated the Fourth of July on the trail. (23) We ate roasted antelope with gooseberry sauce, sang patriotic songs, and recited what we could remember of the Declaration of Independence. (24) This is uplifting to think about. (25) Perhaps that's enough for now. (26) Later I'll tell you about crossing the Columbia River. (27) Now that was an experience!

Question:
Choose the BEST way to revise sentence 12 using a connotative word to create a more negative tone.
Select one:
a. The uncultivated, treeless plains stretching to the horizon worried many emigrants.
b. The uncultivated, treeless plains stretching to the horizon scared many emigrants
c. The uncultivated, treeless plains stretching to the horizon upset many emigrants.
d. The uncultivated, treeless plains stretching to the horizon terrified many emigrants.

Answer 1

To create a more negative tone in sentence 12, the word 'terrified' should be used as it denotes intense fear and creates the strongest negative connotation.

Step-by-step explanation:

Choosing the best way to revise sentence 12 to create a more negative tone involves selecting a word with strong negative connotations. The connotative strength of words in options (a) to (d) increases from 'worried' to 'terrified', with 'terrified' carrying the most intense connotation of fear. Therefore, to revise sentence 12 with a more negative tone:

To create a more negative tone in sentence 12, the word 'terrified' should be used as it denotes intense fear and creates the strongest negative connotation.

The uncultivated, treeless plains stretching to the horizon terrified many emigrants.

This sentence revision uses the word 'terrified', highlighting the intense fear and trepidation the emigrants faced when they encountered the daunting expanse of the Great Plains.