Read paragraph 5 from the passage. Read this revised paragraph.
Besides the history and culture of this illustrious site, the architecture
and design of the Wong Tai Sin Temple also lure travelers. My favorite
pieces of architecture in the temple are the red columns and the red and
gold tiled roof. These pieces are like many other ancient buildings I saw
in Hong Kong, I also enjoyed the beautifully bright friezes and paintings
that line the inside of the temple. Other focal points of the grounds are
the Good Wish Garden, fountains, waterfalls, pavilions, a library, and a
memorial hall. To me, the complex resembles a modern-day community
meeting place with a clinic and meeting rooms available to visitors
In comparing the two paragraphs, what effect does the change in point
of view have?
A)
The point of view makes the revised paragraph more
serious
B)
The point of view makes the revised paragraph more
personal
The point of view makes the first paragraph more
persistent
D)
The point of view makes the first paragraph more
complicated