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Choose the incorrect pronoun shift. Rewrite the sentence correctly.

If you are willing to work hard, a salesperson can make a lot of money here.

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Final answer:

The incorrect pronoun shift in the sentence is between 'you' and 'a salesperson'. To correct it, use 'a person' instead of 'you'.

Step-by-step explanation:

The incorrect pronoun shift in the sentence is:

If you are willing to work hard, a salesperson can make a lot of money here.

The pronoun shift occurs between 'you' and 'a salesperson'. To correct the sentence, it should be rewritten as:

If a person is willing to work hard, they can make a lot of money here.

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