Choose the incorrect pronoun shift. Rewrite the sentence correctly. If you are willing to work hard, a salesperson can make a lot of money here.

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DMin · Answer 1 · 2024-02-19T20:46:46+0000

The incorrect pronoun shift in the sentence is between 'you' and 'a salesperson'. To correct it, use 'a person' instead of 'you'.

The incorrect pronoun shift in the sentence is:

If you are willing to work hard, a salesperson can make a lot of money here.

The pronoun shift occurs between 'you' and 'a salesperson'. To correct the sentence, it should be rewritten as:

If a person is willing to work hard, they can make a lot of money here.