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Greetings. I write to you today on behalf of my firm, Lyon and Lyon, and

wish to inform you of a grievous error. It seems that somebody – let's
call him "Chad" - messed up the order forms so you didn't get your
subscription to our newsletter. Oops.
Which of the following most effectively revises the passage for clarity and
consistency in style and tone?

Greetings. I write to you today on behalf of my firm, Lyon and Lyon, and wish to inform-example-1
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Answer:

C

Step-by-step explanation:

Greetings. I write to you today on behalf of my firm, Lyon and Lyon, and wish to inform-example-1
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