Question

What are your guy's opinion on this intro for an essay and what would you change

Title: A Dogs Best Friend
Intro: We all know that a man's and woman's best friend is a dog, but who is a dog's best friend? Is a dog's best friend its owner, the mailman, or maybe another dog, it depends on the relationship.

Answer 1

Its good over all. But, I think it just needs a little more info ;)

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Answer 2

If that's all you got as a intro, then it's not that good, first of all you don't have much backround info.

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