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Which is the BEST revision for sentence 1 ? It is surprising that settings can often bring strangers together. Is it scientifically true that settings can bring people together? The right setting can often bring people together—even enemies. Artificial settings can often bring people together—more than natural ones.

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The best revision for sentence 1 would be: "The right setting can often bring people together—even enemies."

This revision maintains the original meaning of the sentence while improving its clarity and conciseness. It effectively conveys the idea that a suitable environment or context can facilitate connections between individuals, even those who may have been adversaries.

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