Question

Hey what do you think so far

* are a nouns action

( ) are somebody's thoughts

Normal text is talking

CAPITALIZED TEXT is shouting





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*stumble*

Jai- *He runs as fast as he can away from the three guards chasing him, he looks back and forth pulling his black cape back onto his ears. *

Guard #1- HEY YOU COME BACK HERE!!! *slowing from exhaustion* (How does guy run so quickly. He looked a little shady before but now somethings definitely off.)

Guard #2- SPLIT UP!! *Hes out of breath and falling behind*

Jai- *jumps up onto a dumpster and then a roof then continues to jump* *nervously laughs* (that was really close royal guard almost immediately jeez I just snuck into the kingdom) *spots a doorway and slips in*

Guard #3- Guys he’s gone *pulls off helmet and shows her long brown hair* *revealing that its Red* (Somethings definitely off here)

Jai-*Looks around and spots the royal Butlers and maids' outfit * (Am I in the Castle?!?!? Wait- I can use this but I need to hide my ears a butler's outfit won't work)

Jai- *looks back at maid costume* ugh oh well *puts on a maid's long dress and hides his tail then hides his ears under his little hat pushing his hair into his face* (Well I don’t know if that believable but it's worth a try)

Servant- *walks in* Oh I'm so sorry ma’am I'll leave I didn’t see anyone walk in

Jai- *in slightly higher voice that sounds like a womans* you're fine I already finished I'll go (That was close) *bows a little*

Jai- *walks out quickly* (WOW the castle is expensive looking) *looks around and pick up a vase* Puts vase down* (So now I need to just find the kings room)

Jai- *Walks around the halls spots a guard by a door* (ill just pretend that I belong here) Hello sir may I enter I'd like to tidy up

Guard- um yes ma’am *slightly stuttering* *opens door* here you go

Jai- Thank you sir *Bows and smiles slightly* (I can't believe that actually worked) *Walks in and looks Around* *Starts to notice it’s a bedroom* (wait- why was there a guard in front of this room) *gets startled as he hears someone talking outside* tries to quickly put down the paper he was looking at

Claude- Excuse me *he says softly*

Guard- *he doesn't speak but instead open the door and look down*

Claude- Thank you (Why doesn't anyone ever speak to me) *walks in and notices a maid looking at him like a deer in headlights*

Jai- *Staring kind of blankly* (THIS IS THE PRINCES ROOM!?! Wow he’s pretty mousy looking) U-um hello hi I was just uh- cleaning? *hiding the paper behind his back*

Claude- (what she’s talking to me? Must be new here but is she a she wai wait- she's talking to me!!) Oh, hello continue to do what you were doing, and I noticed you looking at my studies though I don’t suppose you can read can you?

Answer 1

Absolutely fantastic

Answer 2

It's great, if you turn this into a book, can you please tell me the title because, I want to buy 4 copies : )

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