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Another is long wait times. When there is bad weather it, vehicles arrive later than usual. Whenever there is “signal problem” on a commuter rail, subway, or metro line, waiting times are made longer.

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Long waits are another. Vehicles come later than usual in inclement weather.
Waiting times increase if there is a "signal fault" on a commuter rail, subway, or metro line.