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PERSONAL NARRATIVE: Ha doesn't know much English, so she describes her surroundings based on how she sees them. For example, she

doesn't know what a hotdog is and describes it as "the pink sausage/ snuggled inside bread/ shaped like a corncob/ smeared with sauces/
yellow and red." Choose a place from your own life-your classroom, the hallways, the library, your school's lunchroom-and describe it avoiding
terms usually associated with the thing you describe. As you write your description, use the excerpt from Inside Out and Back Again as
inspiration.

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Through the lens of Ha's experience in 'Inside Out and Back Again', I described the school cafeteria using vibrant, unusual imagery to evoke the five senses and showcase the environment in a new light.

Describing a Familiar Place in Unfamiliar Terms

Inspired by the evocative imagery in Inside Out and Back Again, I shall endeavor to recast a quotidian environment, the school cafeteria, in an unfamiliar hue, akin to how Ha perceives a hotdog in her new surroundings. This everyday 'feeding ground' - a bustling symphony, remains unacknowledged in its nuanced existence. It is a sprawling canvas where the cacophony of clattering ceramics, the orchestration of disparate voices, and the ballet of hurried footsteps compose a symphony of adolescence.

In the heart of this edifice, metallic trees sprout vertically from a mosaic stone carpet, their cascading silver canopies offering a drizzling waterfall of purified earth's blood to parched learners. These strange, long-necked creatures with heads affixed to the sky pour tirelessly, while skittish humans form meandering serpents, eagerly awaiting communion with these metal sentries.

Surrounding the room, rectangular monoliths of polished timber populate the space, their flat surfaces adorn with vessels carrying harvests transformed - the symphonic blend of color, texture, and aroma teasing the sensory tapestry. Upon these offerings are geometrically precise partitioned entities, each compartment an individual realm housing a different facet of nature's bounty, reimagined through the alchemy of heat and spice.

The air hums with a polyphony of aromas intertwining, a ballet of olfactory sensations - pungent, sweet, and savory notes held together in an accented dance. It is here, amidst this bustling tapestry of sustenance and social choreography, that the ritual of midday nourishment unfolds. A place not merely for ingestion but for the knitting of communal fabric, the sharing of tales, and the unspoken camaraderie that bonds through shared tables.

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