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The way Squeaky changed because of conflict with her brother was, that she stopped being annoyed from always taking care of Raymond and started to believe that her brother had potential. The evidence from the story is in paragraph 25. Squeaky said “And it occurs to me watching her smoothly he climbs hand over hand and remembering how he looked running with his arms down to his side and with the wind pulling his mouth back and his teeth showing and all it occurred to me that Raymond would make an excellent runner.”

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Squeaky's stance did sway, no more dismay,
Once annoyed with Raymond's care, she found a new air.
Conflict with her brother, a twist in their tether,
In paragraph 25, a revelation, like birds of a feather.

"He climbs with grace, hand over hand, a smooth trace,
His running style, a wind-blown smile, teeth on display,
It struck me then, like a running gem, he's got the potential,
Raymond, a runner's essence, truly exceptional."
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