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The bicycle has large wheels, a seat that is big, and tall handlebars. parallel structure

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a good correction:

The bicycle has wheels that are large, a seat that is big, and handlebars that are tall.

a GREAT correction:

The bicycle has large wheels, a big seat, and tall handlebars.

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Though both examples are perfectly acceptable corrections, the latter one is much better writing stylistically.

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